Thanks, Blaise, for another fine story. I always find it heard to read these so very sad stories of people who somehow lost the love that drew them together in the first place.
Strong tension generated through the prose style and syntax - and the cross-cutting between the cruise and the scenes from their earlier life led to lots of open interpretation. Always a good quality in a short story 👌 This one had lots of soul in it, and felt close to your heart: damn fine work 🤝
Thanks, Blaise, for another fine story. I always find it heard to read these so very sad stories of people who somehow lost the love that drew them together in the first place.
Strong tension generated through the prose style and syntax - and the cross-cutting between the cruise and the scenes from their earlier life led to lots of open interpretation. Always a good quality in a short story 👌 This one had lots of soul in it, and felt close to your heart: damn fine work 🤝