A nice portrait of estrangement, with well-crafted figurative language - would be curious to know more about their before-and-after; if you have a prequel or chapter two in mind, I say go for it
What comes to mind is Simon and Garfunkel's song "The Dangling Conversation". Somewhere in another universe the ring is on her finger and they have been married a long, long time.
"Let's go get cotton candy." 🥶😄
A nice portrait of estrangement, with well-crafted figurative language - would be curious to know more about their before-and-after; if you have a prequel or chapter two in mind, I say go for it
What comes to mind is Simon and Garfunkel's song "The Dangling Conversation". Somewhere in another universe the ring is on her finger and they have been married a long, long time.