Tight prose, and strong characterization and world-building: the dystopia felt authentic, well-rendered, and claustrophobic. A backstory chapter on the watcher profession, or an extension into election season, would make for a great Part 2 next Sunday 🙌
Did Not want to stop reading. Full of intrigue, suspense, and creepy imagery. A real page turner, if it was a book. Looking forward.
Thanks, Connie - so great to hear the kind of feedback that tells me I hit the target, haha.
Tight prose, and strong characterization and world-building: the dystopia felt authentic, well-rendered, and claustrophobic. A backstory chapter on the watcher profession, or an extension into election season, would make for a great Part 2 next Sunday 🙌
...then I see you've got a Part 2 planned. Perfect 👌